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Post by Miki on Jun 21, 2010 23:12:25 GMT -5
So I'm thinking of making a commercial for Broken Truths. Like some commercials do, I want to put some cool, dramatic phrases to introduce BT and make it epic. I'm using the song 'Hero' by Skillet. Anyone have anything clever to say? I can't think of anything myself...just post if you have an idea! Thank you!
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Post by Bhu on Jun 22, 2010 6:59:03 GMT -5
Thanks, Miki! I remember I was going to do it a while ago, but then I got distracted with life  I may still do it, but thank you for doing one too!
A creature created by man can show no pity for those their programmed to slaughter. (about the loyal Folami)
But a few rise above their masters puppet strings. (about the kind Folami)
She was given as their Messiah, brought to lead them to the Salvation they long for. (Ahlam)
Blood will turn the lakes red, but four will paint them blue again. (the peace leaders)
Just some lame ideas. I will work on some graphics for the commercial today. Perhaps Ilyich can help me with that because she's is a graphics artist, too.
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Post by Ilyich on Jun 22, 2010 10:52:35 GMT -5
-dances in- thats an amazing idea Miki and Bhu! Like Bhuvana said Im a graphics artist and would love tohelp in anyway you owuld like. (I can also get music lol) Hmm the epic wording shall be interesting. I'll go find some stuff (flys through boards)
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Here we are...
"We were created. We are machines. We can not feel. Death is our job. If freedom was given, we wouldn't take it. We're nothing but slaves to our human lords!" -Bidziil
"Run, little weasel. Return later in life. This has been fun. In the future, perhaps Akando will be yours." - Ezhno
"May we move on with our lives, or better yet move closer to the ends of others?" -Kaylie
"Tell me what our lives mean then, explain to me why I can't just shut my eyes and pretend" -Carska
"Young Alia, my dearest leopard, you are a chosen one...a Peace Leader. You will lead both the cold and warm to victory." -dio
"Your fellow feline is a danger as well. Even when all share a mutual distaste for the Murder Apes, some believe their species is the only ones who deserve their freedom back." -dio
"I have called you to inform you of your calling." -dio
"But.. But I can't even lead my own Pride to peace, let alone the world! My own blood is as dark-hearted as my mate, how can I be the right choice?"- anabi
My depressing plot discription -----
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Life.Death. Simple freadoms. Sometimes its hard to understand why we're still breathing. When our friends lay about us in heaps and piles, there own lungs frozen in time. Death is all around us, and it would seem the only way out is through the clotting blood. Three, there are three willing to take us there, their paws seem to hover over the blotted scarlet. They who hold gods words in there ears. We the wild, and yet the tamed. We must follow them. Our ears pricked and our claws extended. We the pupets to our own loyalties, must give up what fickle pride we hold so tightly and step in line to the peace we felines so yearn for.
But man has diffrent objectives. His tainted grip reaches for our throats. Murder apes with their clawing fingers attempt to cage us as we all once were. For here in this new land we do not belong. Man facied us for our coats, our power adn so he took us. Took us from out homes and our beds. Took us from our families and friends. And he locked us in cages adn insnarred us with his dark desires. And when we escaped he let out his wrath. For man seem to think themselves Dio- think themselves god. And there God is wrathful.
The Murder Apes, they call us killers. Call us man eaters. and perhapse we are. They have brought forth a new breed of canine to desimate us. The huge wolves stand as tall as a lion and hold the power of a tiger. The kill without hesitation, there maws slick with dripping gore. Oh thoes three have a hard job before them. It seems the entire world has placed its fangs before their crusade.
Folami, Man, our fellow felidae. So many step infront of them and snarl away peace. Swat away the perfection they offer. Malice and darkness threaten to take over everything, and what can we do but watch. There are sides to be takin, wars to be fought. And nothing but our deaths to stop us.
The world is cold, when all thats left are those scattered Broken Truths.
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Post by Miki on Jun 22, 2010 12:07:43 GMT -5
I like those lines, I'll try to use them to the best of my abilities. =)
Ilyich - I like your summary, but I'm afraid that if I put that all in the video, people will get tired of reading and just give up. But I'll take phrases from it that sum up BT and put the whole summary that you wrote in the description. When I finish the video I'll post it on YouTube, and maybe when we advertise on other sites we can post the video with it.
And Bhu, I think you should still make a commercial, if you've got time. I think the more variety of commercials we have, the better!
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Post by Ilyich on Jun 22, 2010 12:11:56 GMT -5
Yeah I figured that half way through writing it xD But I was on a role so... xD Sorry
Im glad ^^ May I make one as well then? :3
I have an idea with the song Room Of An Angel by Akira Yamaoka ... |
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Post by Miki on Jun 22, 2010 12:15:00 GMT -5
Glad to hear! So, I have your permission to use what you wrote? Both you and Bhu? I'll probably take a little from each. That way I don't feel like I'm stealing. And I'll definately give you both credit.
You should definately make a video of your own! Like I said, the more variety of adds we have, the better. =)
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Post by Bhu on Jun 22, 2010 12:31:28 GMT -5
cant wait to see videos from you both. i was doing graphics for it today, but i explained in the cbox why I have stopped. i will pick back up tomorrow, i promise. thank you both so much! <3
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Post by Miki on Jun 22, 2010 14:19:07 GMT -5
Thanks for making the graphics you guys! I would have no idea where to start with how to make them...I'm excited to make this, and I don't know how else to hint at how to get them done ASAP lol...but really, take your time to make them look good =D
I've also had inspiration to make a video to explain the Folami(s) [is that how it is plural? Folami or Folamis???] Anyways, I found a good song for the Folami and want to make a video for them.
My video I'm working on now I think I'll use just to explain the gist of BT, and then I'll make another one using quotes and all.
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Post by Zayden on Jun 22, 2010 14:53:12 GMT -5
I have a saying but it is off the top of my mind (Broken Truths)
The turth has been broken and there is nothing you can do to hide it......great pain will be caused and it all because you have broken the truth.
It doesnt match up to everyone else though
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Post by Ilyich on Jun 22, 2010 16:14:23 GMT -5
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Post by Miki on Jun 22, 2010 17:46:04 GMT -5
Thank you soooooo much!!!!! =D
I don't want to ask too much, but would it be possible for you to make a graphic for the new pride, Eznox, and maybe one of two big cats fighting? I'd also prefer if the one of the two cats fighting didn't have any words/phrases on it. And I'll gladly pay you some stones to make those, Ily!
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Post by Zayden on Jun 22, 2010 19:00:29 GMT -5
Yah um wat about the Eznox Pride its leader is an ocelot so how so u get one of those pictures at the top?
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Post by Ilyich on Jun 22, 2010 19:32:04 GMT -5
No need to pay me Miki ^^ i'll go make them now
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Fighting image
Eznox pride image
Code for Bhu- <a href="http://s336.photobucket.com/albums/n344/silentshadowstar/?action=view¤t=3148287079_f75b8eda6e-1.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i336.photobucket.com/albums/n344/silentshadowstar/3148287079_f75b8eda6e-1.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a> |
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Post by Bhu on Jun 22, 2010 20:07:58 GMT -5
I am actually REALLY happy you want to make a Folami (I think that's the plural I decided on, though I have messed up and done Folamis, too so whichever way you want) one too, Miki, because %99 of my graphics I am doing are of battle between Folami and feline...lol.
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Post by Bhu on Jun 22, 2010 20:41:17 GMT -5
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I may still do it, but thank you for doing one too!