Ms. Roleplay
Cub
I am the Lorax, I speak for the trees!
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Post by Ms. Roleplay on Jul 27, 2010 23:45:12 GMT -5
Hello there Tiger. So. Welcome to the school.
First off we're going to make a character. This character can only be used in the role play school unless you submit it to the characters board in which case it will have to be accepted by another staff member.
Start by filling out this form and then I'll give you some pointers. This is just the regular standard application for Broken Truths because after all we are trying to teach you how to RP here.
[b]Name:[/b] (be creative) [b]Nickname:[/b] (If they have one) [b]Gender:[/b] [b]Age:[/b] [b]Appearance:[/b] (Eyes, coat, claws, etc. and (optional) a picture; please, if no picture have atleased a 5 sentence description) [b]Height:[/b] (Be realistic! No Ocelot is as large as a Tiger!) [b]Weight:[/b] (Be realistic! No Ocelot is as large as a Tiger!) [b]Length:[/b] (Be realistic! No Ocelot is as large as a Tiger!) [b]Species:[/b] (Tiger, Ocelot, Leopard, Lion, ect.) [B]Rank:[/B] (alpha, head huntress, hunter, cub, loner) [B]Mate:[/B] [B]Friends:[/B] [B]Parents:[/B] [B]Siblings:[/B] [B]Offspring:[/B] [b]Personality:[/b] (atleased 5 sentences [b]History:[/b] (All the adult characters originated in either a far away place or a mill. They are all victums of the Illegal Pet Trade. If its a cub, its up to you whether they be a victum or not; atleased 5 sentences) [b]Extra/Other:[/b] (Basically what it says)
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Ms. Teach-a-Lot
Cub
Sit down and be quiet. Either learn from me, or die already.
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Post by Ms. Teach-a-Lot on Jul 28, 2010 7:16:36 GMT -5
Just as a beginning note, be sure to follow the form rules. Many times, people dismiss the "five sentence" rule that is put there, thinking no one will enforce it. Well, it is enforced, so make the staff's job easier and follow it the first time. It's such a foolish and avoidable reason to be denied a character for.
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Tiger
Huntress
Fly Away...
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Post by Tiger on Aug 2, 2010 16:21:17 GMT -5
Name: Yesenia (means Palm Tree in Spanish) Nickname: Sen, Seni Gender: Female Age: 1 and a half years old Appearance: fohn.net/tiger-pictures-facts/white-tiger.jpg (it may not work) Species: Sumatran Tiger Rank: Loner Mate: * Friends: * Parents: She doesn't like to think of her parents. Siblings: None she remembers. Offspring: * Personality: Yesenia craves company. She feels alone easily, and will do almost anything to have someone to talk to. When she's with someone else, you see a happy, generally brave girl, but when she's alone she becomes a terrified, fearful tiger. But no matter what, Folami terrify her and she will run away from a friend if Folami are around. She hates this fact about her, but... You have to do what you have to do. Secretly she wishes a human will find her and take her back to a zoo where she could be happy - and never again alone. History: Born in a zoo, she lived a generally happy life until she was seven months old. In a result of a fire, she escaped the zoo and was lost. Now she wanders around, surviving on her own. Her zoo implemented special programs so that eventually, endangered animals could be released back into the wild. Thus, she had a general idea of what to do, and while not flurishing, she's surviving. Extra/Other: She supports the Peace Leaders generally, but she secretely fears the fighting and hatred will go on forever. She feels that neither side (Murder Apes/Folami or felines) will get killed, just come up with scarier and crueler things to do to each other.
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Ms. Teach-a-Lot
Cub
Sit down and be quiet. Either learn from me, or die already.
Posts: 4
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Post by Ms. Teach-a-Lot on Aug 2, 2010 16:37:09 GMT -5
Okay, first things first. The picture will work if you take away the .jpg part (Bhuvana told me to inform you of that aspect). I do like her personality, even if it is on the shorter side. It's unique in the sense that it's honest. "Folami terrify her and she will run away from a friend if Folami are around." Most will not have this be part of their characters personality for the soul reason that they are too proud for it. But it's a realistic flaw, which is much appreciated by higher up roleplayers. Flaws are ALWAYS welcome.
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Tiger
Huntress
Fly Away...
Posts: 60
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Post by Tiger on Aug 2, 2010 22:20:54 GMT -5
Seni's actually the only character I actually didn't pull a personality panic on. I always worry if they have enough flaws. xD So the thing about the personalities made me very happy :3 Thanks yous
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